Her sentence: The flies--most ardent admirers--dart about my face.
from A Great and Terrible Beauty by Libba Bray
An appositive phrase set apart with dashes emphasizes--a bit sarcastically--her admirers.
My sentence:
Their thoughts--most unruly soldiers--meander across the galaxy. (Speaking, of course, of my students, whose minds do tend to wander!)
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